thats a relly gr8 poem i'm not sure weather it's about your own personal feelings or just made up but whatever, its cool coz i can really relate to it coz im feeling da same... a bit rejected and neglected confues feeling a bit abused that sorta thing, keep it up lizz x

This is a great poem. i loved it. you should write more. you are a great writer. i also give this a 5/5 i can also relate to this poem. keep it up girl and stay strong....luv and huggs...missy