by Richard May 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A fist through my chest |
by Brookeღ
Very deep poem! You show great detail and emotions in your work that always makes for a good read! ~Brooke~ |
by jencam
I liked this one alot too. You have a very captivating and detailed way of writing. very enjoyable |
by Leah20
Wow, you hit home on that one, this sounds like the exact thing my ex said to me. It brought a tear to my eye. I really enjoyed this poem, but I didn't like the last line, Rhyming "free" and "me" in a poem that doesn't have a consastant rhyme scheme doesn't work out in this poem. However, you still did a really nice job on this, keep it up! |
Great poem! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥ |
I Loved The Powerful Display Of Emotion In This Poem, Beautiful Write 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |