Great poem. Love it. Keep it up.~Red

long time no contact, well another great poem its sad and im sorry i hope for the best my grandma is almost 100% blind now and i havent seen her for 5 years now she cant even see me but keep ya head up peace

That was really beautiful and really sad at the same time. I wish I was closer to my grandma. Just try and cherish every single moment with her. Take care.

This was an impressive work, Kalika. You did a marvelous job of poetically verbalizing the keenly agonizing feelings brought on by the awareness that a loved elder is facing his/her sunset years.