wow~ that is such a great poem! very meaningful...kinda sad too! really good job! 5/5

OMG ... i love it .. so reall and deep ... 5/5 ...keep it up

wow thats god sarah!!!!!! keep writen!

LUV YA TONZ!

Chancie.

wow this is one talented gurl right here lol ur really good.... how long u been writing? u write in an interesting way AWSOME

Ally

Great poem hun!! keep it up and i hope you can remember the poems your mom got rid of. love you so much hang in there. call me anytime

~Cara

Scary, But Good.
Well Done,

Failed

thanks everyone for ur comments!!

WoW... no comment ... ican feel the pain in it.... keep it up

This is really good and powerful. Actually reading this inspired me to write a poem of my own, so thank you for that! :) And thanks for the comment on mine...always appreciated!
~Midnight Sun

"I keep cutting in vain"

i can really identify with that line.
thank you.