Stay

by steve   May 11, 2005


In the war of your hope I believe I'm losing
why is it death that you may be choosing
Is dancing on the edge what you find amusing
I just need an answer I'm not accusing

you're feeling cold and you feel all alone
I hate to see how distant you've grown
the light in your eyes now cold as stone
and all your dreams out the window they're thrown

the hope in your voice has become so weak
all you say, now sounds so bleak
like the pain in your heart has reached its peek
and sends another tear streaming down your cheek

wheres the girl that I once knew
the one that helped me make it through
she took my gray skies and made them blue
has she given up???can this be true

If you give up on you, you give up on me
there is still hope why don't you see
baby I'm begging, I'm down on one knee
deaths not the answer, live let it be

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ria

    Why is it death that you may be choosing
    Is dancing on the edge what you find amusing
    I just need an answer I'm not accusing

    brilliant way to say this!
    also loved this one:

    the one that helped me make it through
    she took my gray skies and made them blue

    very nice rhyming and flow!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    If you love somebody, Set her free ... Don't worry, she will come back....hehehe...keep it up..muah..

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    You are now added 2 my fav's excellent poem 5/5 hurry up n get writing, cant wait 4 ur nxt poem x

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This is so dam good. gee. the words you use are so unique.

    i gave you a 5. just cause of your word choice. cause the words do in the end make the poem either good or bad. you made your poem good, no excellent. 5

    david

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    You're feeling cold and you feel all alone
    I hate to see how distant you've grown
    the light in your eyes now cold as stone
    and all your dreams out the window they're thrown
    i really loved this part best cuz i was the other person once and i kno how it hurts to be cheated on...5/5

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