give it to her babe. its rele gud
~Freak~

Wow another amazing poem! I reall enjoy reading your poems. You have a lot of talent! Take Care! Another 5/5 Brooke~

this is a great poem!!!!! i can relate!!!! keep writing!!!
ps
would u mind commenting and rating

you made me want to live

thnx 4 ur time :)

*~peace and love~*

Another great poem! 5.0 ♥

Aww, very nicely written. I give it a 5/5. I really like this verse:

you're feeling cold and you feel all alone
I hate to see how distant you've grown

Well done.
-xx-
Much Love
Broken

awesome poem!!
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Reeeeaaaalllly like this poem and well done on getting four rhymes in each part of the poem, must have been hard work.

Great job. It's obvious that it came from the heart. 5/5.

great poem once again, i love them so much plz dont stop writing!
p.s.im going to add you to my favorites:)

great poem, very well writen.. just a suggestion if you can change this part it would even make it better... live let it be

amazing work...heartfelt is always nice...

xxx

wow! i have a poem with the same title, but wow! yours is soooo much better! lol
amazing poem. i'm adding you to my favourites!
xoxoxo

I loved the rhyming! it was a very good poem! 5/5

Wow your poems are amazing! Im loving them. This poem is brilliant! I loved the last stanza, think its sums up everything perfectly.

Kelly
xx

You're feeling cold and you feel all alone
I hate to see how distant you've grown
the light in your eyes now cold as stone
and all your dreams out the window they're thrown
i really loved this part best cuz i was the other person once and i kno how it hurts to be cheated on...5/5

This is so dam good. gee. the words you use are so unique.

i gave you a 5. just cause of your word choice. cause the words do in the end make the poem either good or bad. you made your poem good, no excellent. 5

david

You are now added 2 my fav's excellent poem 5/5 hurry up n get writing, cant wait 4 ur nxt poem x

If you love somebody, Set her free ... Don't worry, she will come back....hehehe...keep it up..muah..

Why is it death that you may be choosing
Is dancing on the edge what you find amusing
I just need an answer I'm not accusing

brilliant way to say this!
also loved this one:

the one that helped me make it through
she took my gray skies and made them blue

very nice rhyming and flow!