by Eden May 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Words usher forth from a liquid shadow who hangs in the lucid air in front of me. She is my own...as I am hers. We will forever be together...she has used my mind...my heart...my soul...my fingers...to reach out to someone and I do not know why. |
excellent, just awsome. i think you did an awsome job. great. i loved it. i think you did great with the whole thing. the words were perfect for what you feel. you really did awsome job. i envy you haha. it was so great really. awsome. hope your ok? keep it up. Much Love |
by Jay27
Wow this is deep, maybe too deep for me to comprehend..couldnt stop reading it though, and will read it again...nothing worse than sugary sweet obvious poetry requiring no thought. |