Wow this is deep, maybe too deep for me to comprehend..couldnt stop reading it though, and will read it again...nothing worse than sugary sweet obvious poetry requiring no thought.

excellent, just awsome. i think you did an awsome job. great. i loved it. i think you did great with the whole thing. the words were perfect for what you feel. you really did awsome job. i envy you haha. it was so great really. awsome. hope your ok? keep it up. Much Love

Nick