by Prince Enigma May 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Hurrying home from school, |
by paulina.♥
That was so sad, but so beautiful. I can relate to this poem. I love my dog and I don't know what I would do if he were to die. :( Keep writing these beautiful poems. |
by Nici
The way you have expressed this boys sorrows works well. I could really imagine his lose and grief. |
by Kayla
Wow...this was long...but after the first few lines...it went uphill...I usually get board with long poems...not this one...thanks for the commets also...keep writting |
awwwwwwwwww...that was sad : ( but it was good...lol I'd be so sad if my dog died hes my baby id be lost without him...but great poem 5/5 |
Wow thanks for the comment Satuxxa. I agree for sure, was just trying different stuff heh. |