Wow hun this is impressive..keep writing your surely talented.. when youve got time check out some of mine..all my love xxx

Hey this one is pretty good. I can honestly say though,.... that even i as a kid lost my little doggy. And i was sad. It was my only companion... and when it died, being as small and inmature as i was... i cryed and cred.

I liked it.

-Courtney

That's so sad! I had a cat when I was young that I lost after having him for 16 years. It was the worst feeling. The dog was my brothers and when he died my brother was the same way. We get so attached to our pets! Very good emotional poem! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

He should of used his Inhaler.. Thanks for the comments people!

hey, really good. It was worth it to read. Good job. 5/5

~no more

its touching...

Great poem! Its really good
Love Julie
XOXOX

this is a gr8 poem! yet sad! i enjoyed reading it! keep up the gd work~!
luv,
pink
ps. chek out sumof my poemz plz....

The end, once again, was very well written. One thing I enjoy about the poems you've written is that you end them very well. This one needs some more work though. The flow is pretty choppy and maybe the one line that goes something like "max, where are you?" needs to be changed, because it's repeated way too many times. I enjoyed this poem and it was very original. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

Wow thanks for the comment Satuxxa. I agree for sure, was just trying different stuff heh.

awwwwwwwwww...that was sad : ( but it was good...lol I'd be so sad if my dog died hes my baby id be lost without him...but great poem 5/5

Wow...this was long...but after the first few lines...it went uphill...I usually get board with long poems...not this one...thanks for the commets also...keep writting
xoxo Kayla

The way you have expressed this boys sorrows works well. I could really imagine his lose and grief.

Keep Writing
Nici

That was so sad, but so beautiful. I can relate to this poem. I love my dog and I don't know what I would do if he were to die. :( Keep writing these beautiful poems.

-Ice