Beautiful my friend, what else can I say. Great job, hugs, love, *Ann*

the second to last stanza is unbelieveable: the paradox of fulfillment in the spouse.

really an amazing piece. like Sunny said, the last stanza should make any womans heart do flip flops.

very good

5/5

kumar, beautiful write as always myfriend...so heartfelt emotions inside, how deep....have a good day, you be safe.

love freedom,
clouds.~

Excellent job as always.

aww very very adorable:) that's so sweet:D...i loved the last line~ it was my favorite....it was awesome...keep up the grat work my friend~
love ya, take care~
*Brittany*

Kumar,

That was so beautifully written and visually stunnung for the reader.

Regards,

Steve