that was good... i like it.... good job.... i love reading what you write.... if ya can will u comment on some of my stuff... i would appriciate having people tell me what they think and how i need to improve...thanks....xoxo

*claps* Lucy you're such an amazing writer! I wish I could write like you! I really like the feeling of peace you get from this poem

Beautiful. So calm.

You know, until today, I never knew you could write this well!

this one is very unique but i luv it also!!!
*allalone*

That's different..such a fantasy..
keeps you wondering..
like my dreams
5/5

-angel-

if you would pplz check out my new poem;
**Silenced Girl..**

would be much appreciated and will return the favor

-angel-