Risk

by Mich   May 11, 2005


Letting someone...
is a risk
Loving someone...
Caring for someone
is a risk...
Wanting someone...
is a risk
Being with someone...
is a risk
A risk...
for being hurt
for letting someone in
Getting to know the real me
My dark secrets!
My deepest fear!
My worst pain!
Knowing these things...
is a risk.
A risk of having my heart broken,
Shattered!
Incomprehensible pain
It\'s just not worth it.
Love is not worth the risk!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Mich --
    You want honest feedback, right? Well, who wouldn`t..
    Honestly, this kind of scared me! The exclamation points showed how much emotion you truly expressed in this poem, and it was great. I really liked it, it grasped my attention throughout the whole thing, and the flow was good. I can picture this in a scary movie. You know, like, a big scary witch is screaming things at the innocent little farm kids, and, that would be something she would say. I`d probably pay 10 dollars just to see someone actually say that.
    5/5
    Amazing.

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 19 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Although I must disagree and say that love is worth the risk....it is still a well-written poem.

    ~*~Christina~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Good poem, it shows how many people feel about love and portrays the feelings well, some interesting points were made and I enjoyed reading it, well done and keep it up

    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Good poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    In my opinion you used "is a risk" way to much along with the word "someone" You have good meaning and emotion. The poem needs some work. It has potential! Take Care! Brooke~

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