Hidden messages

by Sinister Soire   May 11, 2005


The clouds are moving in
And it’s raining on my day
Forecast for the overcast
And it will not go away

The clouds come in so quickly
And the rain comes down in waves
Quickly rising to my head
The depths my body craves

How is it that I can see
While I’m drowning in this rain
The waters deeper than my body
I can’t see through the pain

The only way to get clear sight
Is to get my head up high
Get my head above the clouds
If only I could fly

The cinderblocks around my feet
Prevent me from escaping
Drowning isn’t all there is
My wrist the wholes are gapping

A savior comes to greet me
In my bloody water grave
It told me that to get away
I would have to just behave

I quietly sat and listened
Yes in the bottom of a lake
And it lifts me up out of the water
My bindings it did break

Through the pouring rain above
It lifted me through the clouds
Parting them before my eyes
Like the densest darkest shrouds

It told me that to make life work
I would have to take some pain
It told me to keep above the clouds
So that my world can drain

I did not understand what happened
But I did learn something new
Dreams are more than just nice thoughts
There hidden messages to you

copyright 2005 © Logan brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    well done written really well
    keep up the good work
    i love reading your poems
    love bianca

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    I love you...I love this poem...you did an amazing job with it <3 You're so awesome, I love you...I'm getting worried though, you keep writing about cutting and now I'ms tarting to get really worried...i love you logan...I hope we talk soon, probably not tomorrow either though, because i go out then also...I love you...and miss you...you're so amazing...xxxx <33

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  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Great poem. Loved it. Keep it up.~Red

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was cool. Very good imagery and descriptive words.

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Hey! Great poem, this one puts across a message alright, and was very well written too. I like the way you got it across with a story and description. Keep it up xxx

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