Never forget that night

by SmileeItsBritt   May 11, 2005


One dance changed my life
It was the highlight of my year
As I was standing in his arms
The whole world just disappeared
It was so dark in the gym
But he made my world so bright
Some may say "It was just a dance"
But I'll never forget that night
The past year of my life was hard
I've thought so low of myself
He told me I looked pretty that night
And my confidence was lifted up
We danced to "Falls on me" by Fuel
I'll never forget that song
It made a difference in my life
Even though it was only 4 minutes long
At that point everything was perfect
I wanted to freeze that moment in time
For the short time that we danced
Everything felt fine
He probably didn't even try
To make a difference in my life
But he did, and I'm so happy
And I'll never forget that night

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  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I enjoyed this poem. In most parts of the poem, you had a flowing rhyme scheme. You also made quite an “over-used” subject seem original; I admire how you did this. I like the use of repetition of “I’ll never forget that night” It made the emotion of the message stronger and gave the title a purpose. Keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    this was ma very sweet pooem funny how the simplest things in the world could me the most in our lives your poem just define this good job...

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