this was ma very sweet pooem funny how the simplest things in the world could me the most in our lives your poem just define this good job...

I enjoyed this poem. In most parts of the poem, you had a flowing rhyme scheme. You also made quite an “over-used” subject seem original; I admire how you did this. I like the use of repetition of “I’ll never forget that night” It made the emotion of the message stronger and gave the title a purpose. Keep up the good work.