hey hey hey that was good 2...keep writin girl..i love your poems...<3 lindsey

Firstly thank you so, so much for all your kinds words and encouragment, I see that you really took the time to read and digest my work, means alot to me, thanks!!

Great poem, so honest and raw!! Diction and flow flawless. Very thought provoking with much visonary passion.

Kisses
Hayley

This is a geat poem, full of beautiful thoughts and feelings. I esp like the last four lines, they close they close the poem very nicely in a celever way. All in all a good job!