Free

by Mandy-Rae   May 11, 2005


I want to be set free,
I don't want to admit I feel this way,
I don't want to feel this.
I can't be so dependent on this,
I need you.
I know I will let you down,
Down so low that you can't look at me,
All you will see is an empty shell.
I love you more than you will ever know,
But how can I know if you feel the same?
If I set you free I'm scared i will lose you.
They always said if you set something free,
And it truly loves you,
It will come back.
Where are you?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Way to many ideas involved in this poem. You should have one focused title and everything should brach off from that central point. I just didn't see it too many different points too fast seemed like you were brainstorming rather then conveying a message to your reader. then it could be me sorry take care...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    It was a great poem. It was well written and flows very well. It was really awesome. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

    Can u plz comment on my poem titled My Story thanks!!!=)

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    AWWWWW Hunnie! This is short, sweet, and to the point! Great work!
    Love always....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXOXOXOX

  • 19 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    It flowed really well, good job

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