It flowed really well, good job

AWWWWW Hunnie! This is short, sweet, and to the point! Great work!
Love always....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXOXOX

It was a great poem. It was well written and flows very well. It was really awesome. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Can u plz comment on my poem titled My Story thanks!!!=)

Way to many ideas involved in this poem. You should have one focused title and everything should brach off from that central point. I just didn't see it too many different points too fast seemed like you were brainstorming rather then conveying a message to your reader. then it could be me sorry take care...