tahts a good poem the only thing i recommend is that u put it in stanzas that way it will be easier to read...5/5 tho n thats really sad too...did it happen to u??....holla back n read sum of my poems if u can...vicky

WOW girl that is sad... good tho 5/5 holla back on my poems if u get a cahnce u got some real talent! i hope u didnt go thru that and if u did...im truly sry

That's so sad!!! But it's really good. I hope you didn't really go through that, but if you did, I'm sorry. Keep writing!