Ha interesting, very different.

Very Powerful Poem Indeed I Gave It a 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I Just Re-Read It, And I Think Your Use Of Curse Words In The Miscellaneous Section Is Very In-appropiate To The Young Viewers Of This Site! I'd Suggest You Place This In a Diffrent Category xoxo-NIKKI-xoxo

get over it! theres one curse word! im sure these kids have heard much worse!

Its Not Appropiate At All I Don't Know What The Kids On This Site Has Heard Or Experienced I Just Was Being Honest,....Truth Hurts? xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

whatever, report me if u want! i dont care anymore! like im not upset enought though without having to deal with ur crap

Oh Don't Get Upset It Isn't That Serious Just Change The Poems Category To Profanity Or Explicit, Whatever You Would Like That Is Appropiate And Call It a Day, Then You Won't Have To Worry About It Being Reported To The Site! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

You leave alot to speculation saying that I undersatnd whats going on but I have no clue. You assume way too much from your reader if you want to say a writer paint a picture with the words not just tells some one something I hope you understand...