NO CHANCE WITH YOU!

by Esmeralda   May 11, 2005


KNOWING THAT I'LL NEVER HAVE A CHANCE WITH YOU,
JUST BREAKS MY HEART IN TWO.
BECAUSE I LIKE YOU,
BUT YOU DON'T LIKE ME BACK.
I CRY ON THIS THOUGHT EVERY NIGHT,
MY PILLOW ALL WET, MY EYES NEVER DRY.
I SEE YOU EACH AND EVERYDAY,
WITH THAT B**** ON YOUR ARM.
OH, HOW I WISH IT WERE ME,
BUT IT WILL NEVER BE.
BECAUSE YOU CANT SEE THAT SPECIAL SOMETHING DEEP INSIDE OF ME!!

-VOTE AND COMMENT PLEASE-

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  • 19 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Ur a good writer but be careful with the anger n try to make it more explanitory

  • 19 years ago

    by JLT

    I like this poem.. I know exactly how that feels.. 5/5.. Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 19 years ago

    by mackenzie

    Agreed. I loved the idea of the poem and it was pretty well written. The caps,however, make it sound like your angry. Lighten up and clean up the language. I can tell you have that poetry spark and your next poems are going to be great!

    ~mackenzie

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