by steve May 12, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Once upon a time I found this little bird |
by Kelly
Aw okay i keep commenting on ALL your poems i know but this one is great. Its so cute and happy and im glad that the birdy survived. You had to let it go in the end (is there a deeper meaning to the poem i wonder) Anyway another 5/5. |
by Dorotea©
Once again, great poem! The idea is pretty original and the flow was good too. I must say I really enjoyed that poem...The last lines were my favorite! Keep writing and take care, |
by lilbballfrk
yes, i agree with No More. its a GREAT POEM! 5/5 keep up the good wrk. |
by ~*Ley*~
this is gonna sound weird, but cant i stay in the nest with you and go out for a little hile? haha i still wanna know that i can perch on your window and you'll fix any wounds i might have collected, or that i can fly in and sing to you when you feel sad, or that i may just sit on your shoulder and talk to you for a while.... |
by AJ
Wow, short but powerful. Good job. 5/5 Thanks for the comment. |