Pefect Day

by girlii797   May 12, 2005


Your hand is in mine,
We are walking down
This deserted beach.
The sand between our toes.
The waves crashing on our ankles.
The seagull is crying out.
The wind is softly rustling.
The sky is full of brilliant colors.
Everything is great.
I’m looking at my feet, when
You stop and grab my other hand.
I start to look up
-BEEP!-BEEP!-BEEP!-
My alarm goes off just
Before I get to see your face.
The dream is gone,
I can’t get it back.
But I’ll always remember
This perfect day.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    great poem girlii.love all of ur poems. take care.
    Tes

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    Thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    wow that made me tingle. DARN THAT ALARM. ive had that happen to me also. dont worry im sure your mr right will show up soon. just be patient and be strong. i hope your ok? awsome writing though i think you did great. Peace out God bless and keep the faith. Much Love

    Nick