by Deathcanwait May 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I HOPE YOU DIE!! |
by Cate Rock
This is a very...original poem...scares the he'll outta me! But it's great. Yet the fact it's choppy from a simple choke to falling off a house landing on her (or his) head seems to washy...if you want intense pain bring it. Haha...but no I think you coulda added more personal detail yet it's still wonderful 5+ |
by xx Ali xx
This poem is great...know how ya feel |
Wow.. this is a really strong poem.. your a really great writer.. keep it up =]P |
by e LIZ a beth
Thats really good. super sad but really good :D |
by StArRiEeYeZ
Just wanted to say that this is a great poem and i have a very strong connection.. keep up the good work and effort :) |