Slightly confusing, but it was hynotically amazing! it captivated my eyes as i read each and every line. some stood out more than others and i think those are what made the poem! like this part:
"Just because I smile,
Doesn’t mean I’m not in pain."
and from:
"So then, what the f--- are you?" to "And hide away all my fears." really made a lot of sense to me. not to say the rest was bad, but i think these were the best parts. ur and amazing writer and should never stop. and i hope u found sum1 to talk to besides paper, its great, but u need feedback sometimes. and i dont kno if i ever sed this but if u ever need nething u can pm me or to make it easier just leave a comment on one of my poems or sumthin. or if u have aim my name is XoXAnimalLuvrXoX
kym
ps: stay safe, strong, and healthy!