interesting start im looking forward to reading part 2 because that will explain a bit more...
~Freak~

This girl sounds like a great friend...I hope your friendship remains strong...

oo were not friends anymore~ =_ (

Great poem..thank you for commenting on mine...5/5
*~*cryingontheinside*~*
xoxoxo

After reading part 1 I just wanted to hear more about this girl, so I can't wait to read part 2 =0)... Very nice poem, great flow...

Would you please comment on my poem Beautiful...

*Hugs Sabrina*

this is written very well and is SOO cute!! i love it.. i thought at the end you were gonna be like.. "and that girl is me" haha, but you fooled me!! GREAT JOB!
you gots a five from meee!!
love always,
Abcede >,<