by ღ Christina ღ May 12, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
other
She is beautiful |
I loved this part too, very beautifully written....I think she sounds like a person I would like to meet =0) lol....Keep writing girl, you have talent!! |
Great poem sweetie! I liked it a lot! Keep up the great work! |
great job!! keep up the good work.. |
by ~*Ley*~
uhm, not bad...you have a spelling mistake and you should have made it clearer who it was the poem was about. made it connect more to you to make it more personal. |
by steve
good continuation from the first part.... |