Hey kayla,
I really like this poem.Then again all your poems are good. i gave you a 5/5. Keep writing. ttyl at school

Madison

Wow that was really good... I know how you are feeling... Yea yea You probably hear that all the time, but I have been throught it all... And I have survived!!! Poetry is AWSOME theropy(i can't spell) Keep it up!!

This poem is good and very well written. I knwo what it feels like alot of the time to feel that no one understands you and or is there for you....Please contact me if you ever feel your about to just lose it all....I can try to help!

Yeah I get on them every once in a while but not too often I have a couple of post

Wow wow wow !! one of ur best poems.... it started off with a great start... the last line could be changed though "i need you back desperately"
well i like ur ending too
5/5
love
amy