by LostHopesCrimsonTears May 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
A love i don't deserve |
Thats really good! Actually, its great!You have a lot of talent! I gave you a 5/5!! |
by Brookeღ
Beautifully written! I loved it! You did an amazing job! Keep it up! I have to give you a 5/5 for this one! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by Ria
I always wanted to do this!Begin and end with the same verse,and change the final line!!!Bah you did that before me:P It was very nice, emotional and direct!Great!:) |
Keep up the work |
by steve
Im glad you found the will to live..whoever it is halping you hold on should feel proud...good poem |