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by Poetic Tragedy08 May 12, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
Your love is like a poison Inside it rots Destroy my freaking life You used to love me lots Now it's wasted Your love eats My heart stops It no longer beats It's been so long you left Forever and a day Now it gets to a dreaded month They call it May April 12 is the day you left May 12 is the day I'll take my leave So now slowly I roll up my sleeve I grab the knife I've used in the past My love for you Will forever last It touches my cold skin I press down hard No one will care I'm a dirty lard I pull it across I'll no longer be Blood drips out You're the last thing that I'll see PLZ VOTE AND COMMENT!
by Piper
i myself have been poisoned before hurts like shit
by Rolo
I think you lost track of the rhyme scheme and that you forced a lot of the rhyming. I do like the idea of it though, so nice job.