Don't Say You Feel mY Pain...

by Fallen Angel   May 13, 2005


Don't say you feel my pain,
for from my sorrow you'll have no gain.
You can't borrow all of my shame.
"Cause if you do, tomorrow you'll have the blame.
After this my life will not be the same.
You think I'm too tame.
You will never feel my pain,
you don't even know my name.
Don't say you feel my pain when you feel nothing at all.

* I know this sux, but i would really appreciate any help and comments that People can give me on this poem. PLEASE!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    This poem is one of my favorites. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by envy

    its good but not quite great yet. you can still spice it up. i love all your work if you have time look at mine