hey, this is great work!!!! when u comment on mine, could u please rate as well? thnx bunches!

Great poem! 5.0 ♥ plz check out sum of myu poems
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That was a cool read i loved it you did well pat yourself on the back take care. Oh you don't have to read 4 poems I thought this one was two poems sorry... Great Job though...

Wow, that was really good! Im really glad that i got to read that. I could visualize exactly what you were saying! 5/5!!

that is a really cool poem.... awesome job... i love it... i jus went to dc today and saw a bunch of the war monuments so that's what your poem made me think about great job

wow nice poem you captured me and kept me till the poem was over amazing

Wow, really like how it flowed

I love the detail, I could see what you were saying, Great job

A totally awesome write, I could actually picture it all happening, great job, keep on writing.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5

wow, that was amazing. terrific job!