Fantastic job, hon. 5/5 for sure! ^.^

OMG!!! Huny that poem is SO beautiful...Im stunned....in awe, WOW! I love this, you have such a powerful way with words, im absolutely gobsmacked. Please keep writing. 5/5

Love and Hugs
xX MAZ Xx

very good. some real nice imagery in there. particularly liked this stanza,
"the spiders scurry from her reach as she moves
howling wind echos for what seems as forever
when the thunder comes, the walls shake an shudder
leaving her with no safety, no cover, no shelter"

always here,
ellie
x

a felt that there is a whole new dimension of depth to this poem which i have not seen in your work before it is maturity wisdom in the words that you formed i had to re read it to get a proper understanding it is excellent well done 5/5 luv jen x x x

fantastic with such vivid imagery. u are so talented!!!! sorry it takes me so long to comment but my favs box doesnt tell me u've written another so i forget to check! well another outstanding poem!
take care
xxxLoUxxx