Gemma, totaly relatable, I have the same thing with a girl, great write!
5/5
Dave.....

another great one babes, keep it up!!!

Aslong as u dont change ur self 4 him u'll be ight...u clearly love him and only if he could reconize what u got 2 offer... love from both sides iz a beautiful thing. now u have good memories with the "lover that never leaves ur heart", that u can look back on in times of need... anywho great poem i really liked it
peace
anthony

I like that you say your love is forbidden. A cool concept to have. Jpoet*

Wow. i cant beleive i can relate to that in SOO many ways its crazy! i loved it tho :)
*Tiffany

You poem is awesome it really speaks from the heart. You said the words that i cant write down

plz read my poems, i need some help

U got it

Okay, once again, I know I commented on this when I was Jpoet, but it just really hit me. I'm almost crying right now. I mean this was amazing Gem!!! Could I print me out a personal copy to look at???? PLEASE!!!! All credit goes to you. I mean it really really touched me. It's so good! Thank you for writing this!
Charisma*

"It hurts you to look at him,
And you see him every day."

That sounds a lot like what I'm going through.
Good work
-Animus

Aww thats sweet i like this one 5.5