Very dark my friend. "Fear shoot straight in my heart" - wonderfully written line.

Luffvoo,
Kal.

sweet poem. I think this si the one i read in Band class. 5/5

This poem was rich with description and a foreboding doom that would make any one crindge great job. If you get time please comment and vote on any of my featured work thanks...

Oh that was such an evil poem, I loved it. The images you created were great. stay strong
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holy crap that wuz really good ~lil slam~ i pictured everything! 5/5 Thank u soooooooooooooooooo much for the comment on my new poem. Yeah i feel pretty sad thinkin bout it but good news, i'm gettin it outta mah system! :D Luv U Lots gurl, Peace, //ari\\