by Tara Sep 26, 2003
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Endless tears drop down my face, |
by Beautiful Soul
Okay a couple of things. I loved your rhyming it flows so smoothly with the poem. Second the title is perfect as well. Now the poem. Crying is never ever a sign weakness. To me tears show how much you care about a certain person. Though there is sadness. There is strength as well. Love is difficult because you never want to lose that person. But time can heal and crying is a great way to cope. All you want to do is forget that person that hurt you but you can't and it causes more pain. The lines connect so well to tell a great story though. :) beautiful |
by arshiya
Beautifully written |
by nhat
Very nice |