Im nothing

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   May 13, 2005


I'm already gone
Ive lost myself
to a black hole inside my soul

you've sucked out all my humanity
my emotions
I'm drowning in the sorrow

how do u think i got this far?
it wasn't on my own
cause before i was lost at the bottom
of a previous black hole

but you came along
and mended up the hole
you mended up my heart
you mended my soul

and just like that
you took it all back
and now I'm worse off than before

and now I'm not your angel
but I'm not a demon either
I'm not anything anymore

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    Wow, I love it. Great job. Keep it up. 5/5 Thanks for the comment.

    ~no more

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very unique way of showing your feelings! Very well done! You are not nothing! Keep writing! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ღX

    hm...different, but this was still good. Keep up the good work 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by --SlIpPin_AwAy--

    Thats really good! You are extremely talented! Keep writing! If you would, please check out a few of mine. Thanks! Great poem!
    xox

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW....I really like this one...i mean A LOT. its sad to think that someone can feel they are nothing anymore...just always remember of what life throws are you...you'll always be something to someone...
    I really loved it amazingly written and a talented writer to say the least...
    take care always 5/5

    ♥(v)Χ§.§ÇÕÕ(3¥¹º¹ ♥

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