Its a pretty good poem, and yeah i used some big words to rhyme in my poem, but it took me a year or writting poetry all the time, to be able to do that.. i used to be so bad at it... u are pretty good, the only thing i would have to say, is poetry isnt meant to be forced, it is meant to be your true emotions and feelings ... so before u rhyme your poem, try to write a poem that doesnt rhyme, solely about how you feel, with alot of detail involved.... use the 5 senses, eg, tough, look etc.... itll make it easier after..... trust me.. all it takes it a bunch of practice and you are well on your way!! keep it up

Well after reading a pissed off poem, Im gonna write one lol, maybe not tonight but tomorrow during Algebra 2.
Cause that makes me angry....
good poem 5/5
~Jp~