How a friendship is lost

by SmileeItsBritt   May 13, 2005



What happened to that smile
When I'd see you in the hall?
What happened to you being there
To always catch my fall?
When I'd say always and forever
You'd respond with "Dats right"
What happened to that?
I want it back in my life
What happened to the hugs
That kept me from falling apart
You're no longer there
And it's tearing up my heart
Your pictures all around my room
The blanket on my bed
Tons of notes inside a box
Thoughts of you race through my head
You're presence always with me
Your voice rings through my ears
memories of you are shed
In the form of blood and tears
I wonder how you lose a friend
But deep inside I know
One is left there holding on
And the other one let's go

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  • 17 years ago

    by Riffy

    Aaaaaah this is ACE! Couldn't be worded any better. It's so true though and I can relate to it. Pity how friendships are lost and how some just slowly fade.
    Great write
    xxx.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    This is a great poem.
    I loved it.
    Very well written.

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Y A R L I N

    WoW u r rite!!
    this is a cute poem and i juss had a BIG fight with my friend and then ill ghive her this poem to see if we van be friends again!
    5+ a million cuz thats how good it is!!

    and thanx 4 the advuce cuz thats the first one i got in a LONG time or....THE FIRST one i really got
    LMAO!

    !.=].♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    omg this was great! i can relate very good! i'm sure everyone can! you keep it up and keep writing! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    I wonder how you lose a friend
    But deep inside I know
    One is left there holding on
    And the other one let's go

    I love that part!! I totally relate to that. And it made me cry. Definately a 5, I would give more if I could.

    Much love,
    Tiff xox

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