by M J U May 13, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Why can't anyone hear me? |
by Robert
This was a good concept but it lacked alot of power to carry it. It was almost like you just scratched the surface and then left us wanting more. I think if you were to think strong on how to set this up as a story your true emotions would flow out. Oh well take care and nice attempt... |
by Amanda Bee
Great job....as usual:) |