Very Nicely Written. So Sad. *Hug*
5/5
Much Love
Broken

Oh that was great, so dark and amazing, I love it, sounds so innocent "it was so pretty" its just great...stay strong
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GreaTt!!!

woah...that was awesome...but maybe you should move this one to sad poems, in the sad section...great job tho loved it 5/5

absolutely beautiful sad written, well expressed words....keep them coming, and thanks for the beautiful comment...much appreciated! you take care girl....5/5

love freedom,
clouds.~

aww that s sad good job though

wow so sad... its a great poem, very creative and poetic! at the start i thought you shop lifted or something like that so the fact you shot yourself was a good surprise at the end awsome work!
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*bec* xXx

aww good poem 5/5
thanks for the comment

Awesome Poem 5/5 (Maybe You Should Put It In Another Category) xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

OMG...This is like sooo good!!! Keep on writting......Its was surprising at the end! I would have never expexted to kill her self..how sad! later