by fallentears May 13, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
You seem to fly above everyone else. |
I really dont like how you compared them to teeth...it just didnt sound rihgt....other then that it was pretty good..though there wasnt n/ething special about it...4/5 |
I love this one...lovely flow and very sad... it reminded me of an awesome book called Tithe...you should check it out if you like faeries :) |
by Ashli
nice little poem! i like the ending, good job! keep it up! |
i love it. its really sweet. xxx |
by Marjan
this is great. keep up the good work. |