the layout of your poems may discourage a lot from reading it.but then still it is good and you have the potential to write quality poems and take the world of poetry by storm.good luck.cheers!!!!!!!!!

the best you can do to format thi poem is to press enter after typing each line.try it out.click edit to do so .

That was maddd good!! i know exactly how u feel. i still love my 1st love and i dont kno if he still loves me bck! i dont kno wat 2 do cuz i love him a lot and the feeling that i feel 4 him wont go away!!!

wow u are an amazing writer keep up the good work!
~*lindz*~

I loved this! I feel like I have been taken back in time about how I felt about someone not long ago. Thanks for the beautiful trip down memory lane. :)