Dont Let Them See

by The Flame Within   May 14, 2005


Hurry wipe your cheek Nick, don't let them see
that your sad inside, time to pretend your happy
oh no, your eyes are red, try to look down
uh oh, hurry Nick change to a smile not a frown
Nick don't sniff, even if you want, try not to cry
if they want to talk just tell them hi
come on Nick, hide you painful tears, don't let them see
someday, i know, that you will be free
but for now Nick, just try not to let it show
remember Nick, you never know how long you have till you go
so Nick, pretend you fine, even though you not
try to act really happy, even though your distraught
please Nick, just don't let them see
that your hurt so bad
don't let them see your pain Nick, act glad
wait till your home, all by yourself in your room
then you can release your pain, and think of your doom
but for now Nick, just don't let them see
that right now your as hurt as you can be

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  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    Wow, this is really good. I love the style of this poem!

    Keep writing Nick. It does help release your emotions.

    I can relate too, i do the exact same thing. There are few ppl who see my true emotions. And now, there are even less.

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Oy, nick, this was a good write... I know exactly how you feel. I put on a mask of happiness around others... don't get me wrong, I'm happy sometimes, but when I'm hurt or sad or angry, I cover it up until I get home... I can totally relate to this poem. Fabulous work, 5/5
    Take Care, God Bless
    Carq

  • 19 years ago

    by Eden

    Very good. I loved it. I can't wait to read the rest of your new ones.

    Eden