Trying to Be a good Friend

by The Flame Within   May 14, 2005


I tried to talk to you, but you just nodded your head, i held my smile, but you act like I'm dead, my words are nothing to you, meaningless air, are these are conversation my friend, do you even care. Sticks and stones can break bones, but words can kill, the greatest death is your silence when i call for you. Is there something i did wrong that has made you upset, I'm sorry, please I'm so sorry, just be my friend, just act a little that on you i can depend. Please, Oh God, Please don't go, you have become so close to my heart, I'm not sure what to do without, where to start. I just want to be your friend, i want to make you happy. to make you smile, i no longer wish to face this brutal trial. Just don't go, stay for a bit, be my friend, please ill be loyal to you, to the very end! I love you so much, Oh God, how i love you,

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  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    THat is ver emotional...a sign of a very well written poem. I feel the exact same way with my "former BFF". I feel this way about someother things too (like myself)...Just stay strong. keep writing, chin up!

    ~love
    ~girlii797

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Omg, Nick......that just like ripped my heart out! I'm so sorry that you felt this way!! Omg, soo sorry!!!!!!!! I'm sure it'll be alright soon though! LOVE YOU LOTS!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by shellybaby

    i am always here for you.
    much love
    ~michelle~

  • 19 years ago

    by Eden

    Very good, Nick. I'm sure everything will turn out alright with this relationship. If you ever want to talk, I will listen and give advice. From the sound of this poem, it's not really a person you are struggling with, but God, right?

    Eden