by The Flame Within May 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I tried to talk to you, but you just nodded your head, i held my smile, but you act like I'm dead, my words are nothing to you, meaningless air, are these are conversation my friend, do you even care. Sticks and stones can break bones, but words can kill, the greatest death is your silence when i call for you. Is there something i did wrong that has made you upset, I'm sorry, please I'm so sorry, just be my friend, just act a little that on you i can depend. Please, Oh God, Please don't go, you have become so close to my heart, I'm not sure what to do without, where to start. I just want to be your friend, i want to make you happy. to make you smile, i no longer wish to face this brutal trial. Just don't go, stay for a bit, be my friend, please ill be loyal to you, to the very end! I love you so much, Oh God, how i love you, |
by girlii797
THat is ver emotional...a sign of a very well written poem. I feel the exact same way with my "former BFF". I feel this way about someother things too (like myself)...Just stay strong. keep writing, chin up! |
by Just Sierra
Omg, Nick......that just like ripped my heart out! I'm so sorry that you felt this way!! Omg, soo sorry!!!!!!!! I'm sure it'll be alright soon though! LOVE YOU LOTS! |
by shellybaby
i am always here for you. |
by Eden
Very good, Nick. I'm sure everything will turn out alright with this relationship. If you ever want to talk, I will listen and give advice. From the sound of this poem, it's not really a person you are struggling with, but God, right? |