by Ria May 14, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Fearful and so close to dread |
by LoreNz0
"your words take hold when reading" |
This was good, b/c it was quite deep. though the flow was kinda off and didnt really match the whole way through ( sorry im big on flow lol) otherwise great poem....and thanks for the critique |
by Truest Lies
It could have used just a little bit more flow, but I liked the ending, even though I found it a little bit difficult to understand the whole picture...but as I have said before, thats just style. |
by Nici
Again full of descriptive lines and phrases which all work together well. |
by katie!
I am speechless by the brilliance of that poem, it was just.. amazing, everything about it, I can hardly find words to say how much I loved it, thank you for sharing that poem with everyone wow... wow.. keep it up |