wow...amazing!!!! beautifully written. keep up the great work and take care,
Ariane
-xXx-
P.S. Welcome to the site :)

Thank u, Fighter! I wasn't expecting such a good rating so soon. What's funny is that our names are almost exactly the same...Take care of yourself,too,aight? PEACE!!!

this is such a great and amazing poem! has such a strong meaning to it. nice lil note at the end, nice to know someone cares! take care

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

great poem..keep it up

Wikid poem! I love all your poems! Don't give up babe, keep writing your so awsome! I'm here if you need anything also :D

XxX

nothin's wrong jelly you're just hilarious hahahahahahhaha! Luv U
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Much! Peace, //ari\\

So cool hon.

Wow, this one got to me, especially the line: "Novacaine couldn't make me feel numb."

keep up the good work.

Steve

i added you as a favorite

wow u're thoughtful.. great poem! 25/5!

That was awesome.. i really love that poem!!!
no words ot describe it!! i foudn no flaws either!!!
take care
x x x x x x

M'dear! That was wonderful!
My favourite line:

"Tomorrow cries for me
Because I am unafraid
To take my own life
And bring the shame to my grave"

Gawd! I heart you also!

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I love this! i love all ur stuff! ur s0o talented!!! 5/5 i can totally relate too this!
x0x0
kandie!

Depression...Yea that pretty much sums me up

Wow, keep up the good work it is good to know that there are other people out there. i added you to my faviortes

Deep, and has a true meaning, and a great message out to people who are thinking about suicide.

5/5

Wow!! That was an amaziing poem!... I like cried and everything. This is exactly how i feel. I loved it. Your a great poet!! Keep it up!

Tara

Great poem. Well written. It touches many hearts that are out there thinking about taking their own lives and I hope you've touched their hearts to think again about suicide.

I love ur poem i can relate && ur right about the whole suicide thing!
thankz

You are amazing :)