by Kit Kat Katie May 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
In her journal |
by shelby lynne
This was awesome |
by Natalie84
WOW! What a powerful poem. I am so against self harm but this poem just shouts out at me...I feel like in a way you are portraying the journal as a call for help…as the journal is the only one that knows of her terrible plight. Normally I would say the repetition of one line can be overwhelming but you definitely make it work in this piece. I love it...excellent write. |
by Areyoucrazy
It's sad . but I liked it .. flowed well . I liked it .. its one of the best I have read so far ! |
by Areyoucrazy
It's aasd . but I liked it .. flowed well . I liked it .. its one of the best I have read so far ! |
by Lushed
the repetition again is a tool you use really well. |