The Valley

by Frankie   May 14, 2005


I don't understand
What makes you do those things
Especially the things that hurt me
I tell you that they hurt
But you just keep on doing them
More and more.

Do you just not care?
Do you just not listen?
You refuse to understand
And its tearing me apart
The more I cry
The farther it goes
Someday, this rift will be too big.
It will be a huge valley
Filled with my tears
No boat will cross
You on one shore
Me on the other
Too far apart to be able to talk anymore
Too far gone for anything
Will you forget?
Or will you just pretend?
That it all didn't happen.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You expressed yourself in a unique way! Another amazing write! Keep it up! Take Care~! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    very expressive poem. great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I can well relate to this one. I felt all the pain. Excellent job. you are talented.

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Strong words all and all but the flow was abit off the message was there but in all I think this could have been better if you just reworded a few lines good try though...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Well expressed indeed. I commend you.

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